I'm going to start this by saying I think your Rumlow is really good; you tag out and you keep with threads until they naturally finish.
That being said, I feel like you're playing him way too sexually than icly. He didn't show much of that in his canon, and I know everyone has wriggle room, but it feels like every thread has some of flirting, hitting on, or sexual innuendo in them. Just talking about a tail with Chase and it's already "going places". I do feel that needs to perhaps be looked into because it makes your character a bit uncomfortable to approach sometimes. Yes, I know, it's Hell, surrounded by killers and nazis and whatever. But it feels like Rumlow is just being used as a vessel to hit on hot people by this point and I felt being honest would be better than just avoiding Rumlow altogether.
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Date: 2016-07-15 06:34 pm (UTC)I'm going to start this by saying I think your Rumlow is really good; you tag out and you keep with threads until they naturally finish.
That being said, I feel like you're playing him way too sexually than icly. He didn't show much of that in his canon, and I know everyone has wriggle room, but it feels like every thread has some of flirting, hitting on, or sexual innuendo in them. Just talking about a tail with Chase and it's already "going places". I do feel that needs to perhaps be looked into because it makes your character a bit uncomfortable to approach sometimes. Yes, I know, it's Hell, surrounded by killers and nazis and whatever. But it feels like Rumlow is just being used as a vessel to hit on hot people by this point and I felt being honest would be better than just avoiding Rumlow altogether.